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Friday, 17 November 2017

my animated story

1 comment:

  1. Kia Orana Vainikolo,

    Next time you should use capital letters and improve on your grammer. I didn't really enjoy your story because I think it should of been longer and included more that 2 backdrops. Although I really liked you sprites. Keep it up!

    Kind Regards,
    Telesia

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